Private work

[mathewlp]

Hello guys, It's been a long time I didn't post...so here I am

This is a private personnal loft work I just finished

HOpe you'll enjoy, all C&C and questions are welcome

Lightwave 9.6, Kray 2.2 (LW 10 sucks for me too many bugs with kray), each frame rendered in about 2.5 hours, little postprod on psp (expo, sharpening, contrast)

Please don't post images somewere else or I could have problems with my client...Thank you very much

[Janusz Biela]

good work...but imho is a lot mistakes...
- weak contrast
- metals tab
- bath sink
- towels artificial (I know still without displacement)
- background does not match to interior
- flower should have fix wire
- mattress does not match to interior
- crap carpet
- IES make ugly effect on the wall
- some bad directions of wood

I suggest:
- make dark wood (with reflection) on the cabinets,
- sun in second interior from the top windows
- floor more reflection with reflection map
- ceramic sink inside holes
- some metals parts fro support drawer in bathroom
- small flower in bathroom
- halogens on the ceiling in bathroom

[jure]

I think it's nice work. Don't get too worried about Janusz's comments, he want's it 110% perfect.

[Janusz Biela]

I think it's nice work. Don't get too worried about Janusz's comments, he want's it 110% perfect.

...Correction Jurko....120%...

[salvatore]

for me a good work!

[mathewlp]

good work...but imho is a lot mistakes...
- weak contrast
- metals tab
- bath sink
- towels artificial (I know still without displacement)
- background does not match to interior
- flower should have fix wire
- mattress does not match to interior
- crap carpet
- IES make ugly effect on the wall
- some bad directions of wood

I suggest:
- make dark wood (with reflection) on the cabinets,
- sun in second interior from the top windows
- floor more reflection with reflection map
- ceramic sink inside holes
- some metals parts fro support drawer in bathroom
- small flower in bathroom
- halogens on the ceiling in bathroom

Hello Yoda

First of all thank you very much for you interest, and comment.
...but imho... I am really proud and happy with these renders, I made great progresses since I started with arch viz, even if that's never enough "perfect" for me and obviously for other people.
Besides just the fact that first you commented this post, and second that you wrote a book on it lol, make me think that I'm not wrong if I let me think my work is quite cool
i hope this great community will go on helping me as much as it did it, until as longer as possible
ps: contrast is the main issue I meet when rendering...even if since I'm using tone mapping this gets better, sometimes i also use ambiant occlusion to better radiosity results and improve contrast, this trick when used properly, is kind of working.
otherwise, could you give me advices how to get rid of ies bad effects on walls (light size stretching?), and also to improve exterior matching with the rest?
For the rest I didn't waste enough time with the deco I know...dead lines dead lines...
Thank you very much O big master CG&kray's Guru.



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[mathewlp]

I think it's nice work. Don't get too worried about Janusz's comments, he want's it 110% perfect.

Thank you jure! O big second master lol this goes right to my heart

Don't worry I begin to know the beast, wild nature is sometimes just the reflect of big inside stucked love lol

[mathewlp]

for me a good work!

Thank you Salatore!
I saw your great renders here this is just amazing to see how much you progressed to get to huge quality imaging now...folks would he be the third master?? for sure I think

[Janusz Biela]

Of course is good render! I just want make the point: good critics raise up skill

[mathewlp]

Of course is good render! I just want make the point: good critics raise up skill

Exactly, totally agree!

[salvatore]

Of course is good render! I just want make the point: good critics raise up skill

Yes ! agree !