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by nico » Wed Mar 18, 2009 11:32 am
image ispired from image on line - not commercial work
all setup as special tread on best lighting
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by Janusz Biela » Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:17 pm
This is prev. or WiP render?
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by nico » Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:27 pm
it's indifferent...if you have suggestion to it ....i can re-render the image witout problem.
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by RogerNyheim » Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:37 pm
what type of flooring is this?
seemed a bit wierd to me, is wood, parquette, linoleum, paint?
less gloss on the floor, but if it's a special type of flooring it's ok...
-r
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by RogerNyheim » Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:45 pm
that book on the carpet need some texturing...
the reflections on the chair and ottoman also needs graded reflections + ref-blur (i think)
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by done » Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:51 pm
Good composition, it would be nice do have the materials have a layer of lacquer (clear varnish) on the furniture, just a combination of some blured reflections and some clear one. Also the floor seems a bit too reflective, like roger said. Maybe some more iperfections to the wall, especially that gray upper left beam there... it looks really flat. Just my 2c if you feel like playing a bit more with it
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by nico » Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:06 pm
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by Janusz Biela » Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:13 pm
But You can made it better then photo.....
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by nico » Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:18 pm
oh johny with help's krayforum i can walking on the moon!!!!
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by nico » Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:28 pm
new materials and little post for delete blue colour predominant
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by jure » Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:22 pm
Nice but not enough light/contrast in colors... Also add IES to the lamp.
- Jure
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by done » Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:29 pm
Looking at the reference, i see how much two details add to the scene:
- the direct sun light on the left, making that diagonal on the wall behind.
- the reflection of the lamp on the floor
Is the missing reflection of the lamp light against the wall a bug or does one have do conjure some extra lw-kungfu to achieve it? (i am asking this generally, didnt notice it so far)
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by nico » Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:53 pm
new update
the lamp is a lumina 3d model with ies of product.
i've changed the light for diagonal light on the wall.
i've remodel the chair
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by larry_g1s » Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:30 pm
Nice work nico. I really like the floor surface. That picture in the background looks familiar.
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