Stair view

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Roger
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Stair view

Post by Roger »

Hello,

This is my 2nd rendering by Kray. Some light effect are done by photoshop.

Pls comment it. Ths!
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geo_n
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Re: Stair view

Post by geo_n »

The scene needs more contrast. And the materials look like self illuminating. Are those lighleaks on the stair corners? love the colors scheme though.
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Re: Stair view

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Cool. Definitely a good showing...particularly only being your 2nd render with Kray.
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Re: Stair view

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almost perfect... ;)

the only thing, but probably this is dictated by the client... personally, i do not like the image format and orientation. the stair theme would rather suggest a 'portrait' or vertical oriented format to give the image a bit more depth. the ceiling is cut off too soon, in general the stair probably needs a bit more 'air'. if free to choose, i also would try a square format for this scene.

cheers

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