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[rosstheboss]

This is my recent work, but, the client didnt like it. so i decided to take is as atraining project for my and to get
more proffesional in kray. so i will post it here and i would like to get comments about it. here is two images that rebder in a diffrent time ... Pls tell my if there is a potential ...

[Alexos]

I know why your client didn't like it: it looks like the typical case of a project that works on paper, in 2D, but when you render it you discover it's absolutely horrible. Now your render does have some problems - the walkway isn't so good and the roundabout looks plasticky and the concrete is a bit flat and I don't know if it was your client that required it like that, but the size of both stone textures seems a bit on the biggish side. But having said that, and I hope you didn't design it yourself, that building is just ugly!

Of course, if you'd added a lot (and I mean a LOT) of vegetation and changed the POV it might have saved the image; but as it is, it's just screaming "Arrr, look at me, I am a giant lump of stone in the middle of nowhere!"

ADP.

[jure]

I know why your client didn't like it: it looks like the typical case of a project that works on paper, in 2D, but when you render it you discover it's absolutely horrible. Now your render does have some problems - the walkway isn't so good and the roundabout looks plasticky and the concrete is a bit flat and I don't know if it was your client that required it like that, but the size of both stone textures seems a bit on the biggish side. But having said that, and I hope you didn't design it yourself, that building is just ugly!

Of course, if you'd added a lot (and I mean a LOT) of vegetation and changed the POV it might have saved the image; but as it is, it's just screaming "Arrr, look at me, I am a giant lump of stone in the middle of nowhere!"

ADP.

I agree totally!

[rosstheboss]

First of all this is not my design. the client come to me with some visual that someone did and ask me if i can do better. so the images are just wip's for him to show him only the direction i'm take (Lights etc ...). any way i'm going to work on that image acoording to the comments and hope i can get super photorelistic image ...

I'll post the image that he did before he came to me ...