second try in kray

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rosstheboss
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second try in kray

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my second try with kray ... any comments ...
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Janusz Biela
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Re: second try in kray

Post by Janusz Biela »

I wait for more :)
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salvatore
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Post by salvatore »

I think you must improve:
1- better glass
2- need background
3- trees
4- no tile texture
5- better camera view
6- street detail
7- better light
8- wall color
9- fence color
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rosstheboss
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some prograss ...

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a little prograss at my work. add some cars trees etc ...
little post in PS. I hope to finish this work until this weekend ...
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Re: second try in kray

Post by brownie »

A zillion time better, except :

-palm trees to close to the building,
-postworked noise is useless or exaggerated
-some cheaper cars would be more realistic :wink:

The bloom effect on the top left window is quite cool.
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