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salvatore
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exterior

Post by salvatore »

a new exterior
all advice are welcome
died users?? :?
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Janusz Biela
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PLUS
Nice house

MINUS:
- strange reflection on windows
- overbright wall
- IMHO bad setup of wood on the house
- flat and poor grass
- plastic plants
- "sahara" background (nothing behinde)
- bad prespective (house looks : small house for toys)
- washing colours (render looks as Fprime)


I wait for update :wink:
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thanks
next render will be better
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Re: exterior

Post by salvatore »

a new step...
i revised the light setting and add back time 9.30 AM
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Post by Janusz Biela »

plants need specularity and reflection, roof is better (good contrast under wood but bad GI - contact shadow), still flat grass :wink: , camera need smaller LENS FOCAL (12-14 + ofcoarse SHIFT CAMERA)
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Post by nico »

the second light is very good...physical?
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Re: exterior

Post by salvatore »

thanks nico
no. the second light setting is normal spot light with sunsky and sunspot
this is a W.I.P. work and i must define a lot surface and so on..
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