New Project ...

Please post finished works here.
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rosstheboss
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New Project ...

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Some New images ...
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Janusz Biela
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Re: New Project ...

Post by Janusz Biela »

Hey! Nice renders! If You will fix surfaces (leather, tv screen, carpet as model...I know the hardest part of render) and light (now is quite too "flat" render) renders should be really good : :D
Imho Windows (too basic, no curtains, empty...) and Sun (should go more inside with three shadows and less power) should be fix also.
Light from ceiling should be warmer
Pillows artificial.
No background view.
Empty on the table (sometimes one magazine or two High Quality books can "raise up" render
CU!
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salvatore
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Re: New Project ...

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to me :
1-the leather texture is too big
2- the scene is too empty and too blue colour
3- carpet too plastic
4- non background in windows and poor detail windows
5- tv texture very strange

good glass vase :D
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Keraressi Abdelkarim
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Re: New Project ...

Post by Keraressi Abdelkarim »

yah janusz right .

and also add image in backdrop like envi outside .
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