New Wip ...

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rosstheboss
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New Wip ...

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Some renders from recent project ...
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rosstheboss
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Re: New Wip ...

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The exteriors ...
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RodriKray92
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Hello, these renderings are stunning, great job. in comparison, my renders are a shame. I congratulate :) :)
Pheidian
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I like your lightning, so things strike me most and let down the great images:

1) Focus on the texturing after you got the lights down, some leather / plastic surfaces are way too high reflective and seem plastic / slippery

2) Focus on the models, the exteriors look great in lightwise and house, but details give them away, like the poor quality cars and other objects. Also texturing is a bit of Issue here, too much gloss / reflection

3) Post production, a bit too much fringe on the images, distorting and giving a head ache, may look ok for print but for me the post production is a bit too heavy.

Other than that, they're top notch!

Edit: I would try a bit toning so the exteriors are not so cold. It seems it's designed to be very warm climate and adding some effect of "warmth" would work. I made a little finetuning for adding the yellow colour and contrast on one image, as well as tuning the colour of green plants, they look a bit too green for me...
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Post by Mario »

I like it! :)
Nice atmosphere, simpe architecture.
Yes maybe a bit to plastic
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salvatore
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Post by salvatore »

I like it :shock:
maybe too cold interior but a grat work!
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