test interior

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test interior

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I hope you like :? Waiting for critics
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:arrow: Top part Crap! :D

but bottom very good. Nice GI... i mean light is every where and still good contrat.
congratulation !
Btw carpet should be with fur (more realistic)
I like right bottom part, is very realistic (exception moire effect on the sofa:
http://www.spot3d.com/vray/help/150SP1/ ... ll-rom.png)
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Biela thanks
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update :?
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what critics? :P
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i like it :wink:
only advice : some more book in the library and more small flor tiles
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It looks good, but there's something weird about the floor bump map. If the tiles really have such a wide inclined edge it will be a nightmare to clean because all the water will collect in the ridges :-)

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think, cleaning 8)
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thomas wrote:It looks good, but there's something weird about the floor bump map. If the tiles really have such a wide inclined edge it will be a nightmare to clean because all the water will collect in the ridges :-)

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Correct...wrong bump map texture with too big seam 8)
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+ 1 for the floor. All the rest is excellent
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Post by 3dworks »

nice start! and one more in the chorus: bump map (if a tiled texture was used for the floor) or smoothing (if u used real geometry for the floor) is definitely wrong... ;)

another thing i would do differently is the glass material, as usually you would have a double layer of glass for such big surfaces, the material should be more visible, also on the reflections side. as it looks now, the window frames are "filled with air".

cheers

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If You will change ceiling for more interesting and will add curtains (some white , some dark) and fur for carpet + more books on the shelf...will by very good render :D
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Have you now 8)
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night 8)
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