Furniture Design

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acmontana
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Furniture Design

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Image for brochure.
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vgabex
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Re: Furniture Design

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Hi acmontana,

Great image, but I have some suggestions:
- Use Shift camera to avoid converging lines.
- Lighting should be more exciting. Try to place an area light or LEM panel to the right to simulate a window. I would also place a nice table lamp on the top of the furniture to the left side
- I'd remove the two small picture frame and size about 75% the middle one, because now they distract attention from the main theme
- Move camera backward and use bigger zoom
- The wall panels are nice, but the main furniture blends into the wall - does not "jump" out and does not get enough attention

Keep on rolling!
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Janusz Biela
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Re: Furniture Design

Post by Janusz Biela »

Hello
Good start!
Try use also day light here example for download:
http://www.kraytracing.com/joomla/forum ... =viewtopic
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