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artattak
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new work

Postby artattak » Thu Sep 29, 2016 7:56 pm

carpet subpatch, level 6 plus. displacement level 0,003
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mebloscianka_RTV_b.jpg

thomas
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Re: new work

Postby thomas » Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:52 pm

Hi Artattak,

Nice work! However, since your work is generally at a high level, I'm going to critique it a little bit - I hope you don't mind:

1) The first image suffers a bit from a lack of variation in color temperature of the light. It looks like all light is neutral white. I know the sky is overcast, but still the light colour is too monotonous. Judging from the green trees through the window you would also expect the light on the ceiling to be a bit greener in colour.

2) Also in the first image: the big squarish shadow on the cabinet on the far left of the image is too sharp, given the overcast exterior and general lighting ambience, to my feeling.

3) Second image: the stereo receiver looks fake, with the superglossy reflection and so much chromatic abberation (or dispersion) on it.

4) Second image: Might be my personal opinion, but while the rest of the scene looks really rich regarding the lighting, the yellow light in the left extra room looks a bit harsh, monotonous and overblown. It would probably look a bit nicer if you'd let some blue exterior light in as well, and mix it with some softer yellow.

For the record: awesome renders. Mine don't reach this level. Just critiqueing to make 'em even better!

artattak
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Re: new work

Postby artattak » Fri Sep 30, 2016 3:34 pm

Thank you for your attention. Positive criticism is always indicated.
Comments correct. About all the comments I am aware of.
These works are commercial orders, the customer has requirements which rarely go in line with realism.
1) I can not use color shades background as change the color of furniture, and this has to be white and not green.

2) Second image: the stereo is simply a mistake. No reflection blur.

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Janusz Biela
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Re: new work

Postby Janusz Biela » Fri Sep 30, 2016 6:44 pm

I had occasion cooperate with him and I know, hi does whole work per image from scratch now in 2-4h total time - this is great!
Now his skill is like Charlie:
Charlie.jpg


...and soon he will start setup surfaces almost without previews (maximum 2-3 prevs before final render) :wink:

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Re: new work

Postby artattak » Fri Sep 30, 2016 7:21 pm

Hey Janusz thank you for the compliment, but a lot of things I learned from you.
Thanks again.


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