mm here is my first kray render :s

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Ngone
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mm here is my first kray render :s

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hello :oops:
I thus begin do not laugh lool I made a scene quickly to entrainer me and I am sad can advise me so that I can improve please.
Any criticisms will be welcome thank you :oops:
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joreldraw
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Re: mm here is my first kray render :s

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Poors textures and materials.
This is the first you need to change...so much! :)
If you like to recieve help with kray add some info from render times and options to optimize this
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Re: mm here is my first kray render :s

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Hi,

the image looks realy flat and lacks contrast. First make sure you have setup your scene correctly. Here are few basic steps:
- add Kray master plugin and double click on it. When it asks you about ambient light and raytrace flags answer "Yes". This will turn off any ambient light and check ON all needed raytrace flags under Render globals.
- Set tonemap to gamma with parametersomewhere between 1.6-2.2
- add Kray Quick Linear Workflow (QLWF) master plugin. In the plugin set Input tonemap to Gamma, parameter 2.2 and leave exposure 1.0. Also check all Affect textures, lights and backdrop.

Open Kray plugin GUI again and choose medium preset from the top preset list. Now you are all set to start rendering with Kray.

About lights: try to keep them simple and as realistic as possible. Sun intensity should be around 300% around 5500K.
About surfaces: try to keep diffuse+reflection close to 100%.

Now play with settings until you get desired effect.
- Jure
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Sorry I had to forget to put my scene on the post
thank you very much has those who helps me it is really simpa from your part ...
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Re: mm here is my first kray render :s

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Hello to everybody I have to try to follow your advice(council) but check c not still that...
I continuous my not easy entraiment :cry:
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Re: mm here is my first kray render :s

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Can you attach textures to use same as you?

At the moment i detect so much problems to fix.

1.- You have on Motion Blur, off this if you dont need
2.- Your sky gradient are incorrect. texture direction is on Z, you need on Y and don´t apply to previos layer because not have previous layer. Change to heading or better use sunsky plugins free
3.- Off renderline on raytrace flag and for me nice to use ambient oclussion.
4.- Your have so much incorrect materias, have any with luminosity and some with 100% reflection & 15 %transparency. Read in forum and manual about materials to learn a little.
5.- Your color sun is white.... change this and use inverse distance 1 not 2
6.- You can raise to 20 or 24 ray recursion limit .
7.- Read about Kray quick LWF too and add to your scene
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