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the whole job done in 14 H .

quick and fast as i could hope u like it mates .

For that short time is very good job.

Thank YOU Master!

Yup, that's a fast turnaround time! Of course there is room for improvement, but for this timeframe: good job!

other one.

Thankbu thomas

Postby thomas on Thu Nov 05, 2015 3:36 pm
Yup, that's a fast turnaround time! Of course there is room for improvement, but for this timeframe: good

What u can suggest me to put more stuff inside like what? To improve details

hi! That's an interesting question.

Given the very short time-frame, I would try to do the following to add a bit more life to the renders.

1) Introduce wood as a material and add some very quick rough detail by beveling some polygons to extend them. For example, the furniture holding the fruit or the table: make either the walls or the table wood (leaves some parts white as they are). Extend either the vertical front parts of the walls or the fronts of the tables by beveling, so they stick out a little bit (5 to 10cm).
2) Add more visuals to walls, or just as windowstickers. This has two advantages: first of all you add life to the scene in a very quick way (just Google 5 minutes for nice fashion images and you're done). Secondly, because you can cover up parts of windows, you hide a lot of the empty space.
3) I would make the floor a bit darker and more gray (cold gray), and add blurry reflection to the floor, and add some black somewhere, and some color accents. Combined with point 1: this is a quick material setup that always works for beauty shots: some bright white, some warm wood as mid-tone, colder gray as dark tone, and then some black, plus a couple of small color accents.
4) In one or two focal points (where the eyes naturally go), add a counter and three or four hanging lights. These can be as simple as cylinders.

That's what I would do!

thank u sir (y) i will make an update

new update.

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