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second try in kray

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:18 pm
by rosstheboss
my second try with kray ... any comments ...

Re: second try in kray

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:49 pm
by Janusz Biela
I wait for more :)

Re: second try in kray

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 5:59 pm
by salvatore
I think you must improve:
1- better glass
2- need background
3- trees
4- no tile texture
5- better camera view
6- street detail
7- better light
8- wall color
9- fence color
:evil:

some prograss ...

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:08 am
by rosstheboss
a little prograss at my work. add some cars trees etc ...
little post in PS. I hope to finish this work until this weekend ...

Re: second try in kray

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:47 pm
by brownie
A zillion time better, except :

-palm trees to close to the building,
-postworked noise is useless or exaggerated
-some cheaper cars would be more realistic :wink:

The bloom effect on the top left window is quite cool.