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Stair view
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:22 am
by Roger
Hello,
This is my 2nd rendering by Kray. Some light effect are done by photoshop.
Pls comment it. Ths!
Re: Stair view
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:53 pm
by geo_n
The scene needs more contrast. And the materials look like self illuminating. Are those lighleaks on the stair corners? love the colors scheme though.
Re: Stair view
Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 12:15 am
by larry_g1s
Cool. Definitely a good showing...particularly only being your 2nd render with Kray.
Re: Stair view
Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 2:03 am
by 3dworks
almost perfect...
the only thing, but probably this is dictated by the client... personally, i do not like the image format and orientation. the stair theme would rather suggest a 'portrait' or vertical oriented format to give the image a bit more depth. the ceiling is cut off too soon, in general the stair probably needs a bit more 'air'. if free to choose, i also would try a square format for this scene.
cheers
markus