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Exterior - scientific centre
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 10:52 pm
by Janusz Biela
This is my first exterior. Very complex scene with large quantity of glass and reflections. Maybe I will back to this scene to render different camera.
Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:25 am
by 3dworks
nice start!! just a few thoughts, as they come:
about concrete: bump levels on right column in second image are way to high, those columns could even have a slight reflection.
what kind of material is the roof made of? looks like no conbstruction material which i could identify. aluminium ore simple anodized metal are looking different anyway.
floor looks like laquered wood - which is not realistic for such an ambient. should be a hard and resistant wood, in any case. or maybe pirelli rubber? linoleum? polished concrete?
the water is moved like in a whirlpool, maybe a calm version with some lotus plats and big orange fishes would be more in tone with relaxed science research?
kray does great caustics, maybe these could be of nice effect in this scene.
cheers
markus
Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 2:38 pm
by sustin
nieźle wyszło, bardzo skomplikowana scenka, czym robiłeś te rozmycia w niektórych momentach? na wodę ma patent robię cały prostopadłościan jako materiał daje wodę (bryła wody, między nią wstawiam kamienie). Jedynie koło samochodu trochę wisi. ile czasu liczyłeś?
pozdrawiam
sustin
Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 3:53 pm
by Janusz Biela
3dworks wrote:nice start!! just a few thoughts, as they come:
about concrete: bump levels on right column in second image are way to high, those columns could even have a slight reflection.
what kind of material is the roof made of? looks like no conbstruction material which i could identify. aluminium ore simple anodized metal are looking different anyway.
floor looks like laquered wood - which is not realistic for such an ambient. should be a hard and resistant wood, in any case. or maybe pirelli rubber? linoleum? polished concrete?
the water is moved like in a whirlpool, maybe a calm version with some lotus plats and big orange fishes would be more in tone with relaxed science research?
kray does great caustics, maybe these could be of nice effect in this scene.
cheers
markus
thx
I know about several mistakes...
This is fast test (I had many idea for check: RPC, bump-procedural water, skylight, sunsky etc...)
Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:04 pm
by pixym
Very nice shot!
But you would better remove the CG peoples?
Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:40 pm
by Janusz Biela
sustin wrote:nieźle wyszło, bardzo skomplikowana scenka, czym robiłeś te rozmycia w niektórych momentach? na wodę ma patent robię cały prostopadłościan jako materiał daje wodę (bryła wody, między nią wstawiam kamienie). Jedynie koło samochodu trochę wisi. ile czasu liczyłeś?
pozdrawiam
sustin
Chodzi Ci o glow efekt? Time 3h.
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 8:15 pm
by larry_g1s
Gorgeous, I love the water. Very nicely done Johny_quick.