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Janusz Biela
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I press G. for White Balance non stop......... Good render like always!!
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Beautiful render, but as always I try to find a point of improvement ;-)

This time: you can see the vertical repetition in the brick pattern, especially due to that one weird brick at the right. I would shift the pattern to the right of left on the top floor, so you don't see the vertical repeat so strongly.

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Re: attic

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thomas wrote:Beautiful render, but as always I try to find a point of improvement ;-)

This time: you can see the vertical repetition in the brick pattern, especially due to that one weird brick at the right. I would shift the pattern to the right of left on the top floor, so you don't see the vertical repeat so strongly.

In spite of my small criticism, I humbly bow down to Artattak, master of Kray :-)
A good remark with a repeating brick pattern.
I mixed two textures and color swatches to mask the repeatability of the bricks.
But as you can see it was not enough.
Refining all the elements is time. Where to take him.
So many professional projects plus a few in the staff queue.
But maybe it's actually better to refine something at 100% than to do a lot of unfinished ones.
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