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salvatore
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new exterior

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A new exterior
All advice are welcome

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Re: new exterior

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Nice render salvatore. Like this very much.

For comment only 2 points for me.

1.- Grass is so much saturate, i like more desaturate and little dark green.
2.- Border of roof is rare material.
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Re: new exterior

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looks good!

please increse contrast, under roof must be dark in corners and more colours .
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Re: new exterior

Post by salvatore »

thanks for your advice. :?
In this render:
1- improved contrast
2- more colour
3- desaturate grass
4- texture under roof
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Re: new exterior

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Much better ;)
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I thing Your enviroment is too bright
Put please: more trees or down brightnes sky + better GI (i see contact shadow under roof and splotches)
Please use Power for Sun (maximum 4)
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Re: new exterior

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yes. true.
The enviroment is too bright
in this render the sun has 6 power
I followed your advice
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ok now what am i missing here, where to control the power of the sun to something like 4 or 5 or 6? is this in the new physky that has physun?
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you can control the power in KrayPhotoMultipler in motion tab/ add modifier
I usually set 500/4-8 (depending the scene)
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Re: new exterior

Post by salvatore »

i follower your advice.
A new point of view
less power sun and sky
more colour and contrast
a little PS post
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good work :D
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I like more the first view. But if you need this shot , need to work on garden.

Try to do a mesh for grass with some jitter deformation to make more natural level. And try to add some grass with kray instance to improve the bored grass.
Too need to work on the texture, is deformed and i can see the tiled.
Why solar panels have diferent textureS? First line ok , but not others.

Ilumination better now
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Re: new exterior

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ies i see
i need work to texture but i have no budget for this work :(
first is solar panel, other fotovoltaic and this is customer shot
good idea for jitter gras! i will test.
thanks. For me is very important you advice :?
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Re: new exterior

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maybe try this technique for grass. might be faster than instanced grass
http://www.newtek.com/forums/showthread.php?t=100274
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Re: new exterior

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i already tested this technique for grass but my result was ugly.
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